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Hi guys,

I've just re-recorded the second song I ever wrote - Lonely Lonely Night. I wrote this almost 3 years ago, the night before valentines day, still aching from break up of me and my first love 2 months before.

Would love to hear your opinions/constructive criticism on it :)

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THis is the updated file
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love it. cool song Andrew. Please attach the lyrics?

The bass line - I heard some strange intonation when it went up high on the verses. Clashed with your vocals quite a bit, I thought.

First blush: cool song.

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